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i went to blackpool pleasure beach after school! i couldnt stop thinking about going on all the rides. i couldnt wait till home time! we got in the car and zipperdipper had got me loads of lovley stuff to eat! i had some chocolate cakes they were lovley! i had a big bag of maltesers a cream bun and some tasty ham sandwhiches! and i had a fruit shoot 
we finally got their. i was stuffed! we got to the conter to pay for our wristbands. when the girl at the counter said it was shutting in 1 hour 
!!! we couldnt belive it 
though we still went. we went on 9 rides. we kept going on the rollercoaster. we couldnt stop laughing. we had to get off the ride because the special needs man told us that we had to go round and go to the back of the queue just because two more people had come. there was loads more seats but he thought that they might just want to sit were we were siting. then it was time to go home we wished that we could of had them 2 hours longer. so we wrote to them and they said that we could have 2 free wristbands so it ended happily ever after! 
we finally got their. i was stuffed! we got to the conter to pay for our wristbands. when the girl at the counter said it was shutting in 1 hour !!! we couldnt belive it though we still went. we went on 9 rides. we kept going on the rollercoaster. we couldnt stop laughing. we had to get off the ride because the special needs man told us that we had to go round and go to the back of the queue just because two more people had come. there was loads more seats but he thought that they might just want to sit were we were siting. then it was time to go home we wished that we could of had them 2 hours longer. so we wrote to them and they said that we could have 2 free wristbands so it ended happily ever after! 
